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IELTS/IELTS Writing task2

Live alone

In some countries, many more poeple are choosing to live alone nowdays than in the past. 

Do you think this is positive or negative development?

 

 

firstly, i have to decide what my side positive or negative or both.

and then i have to think about something for giving examples. 

1. I will take both side example.

 

2.  firstly one is strong, it means one- person households is not necessary to rely on anybody for their business.

 

3. then second one is that two people can take care of together.

 

4. aside conclusion behind for a while cuz i Do not have time but if i am competent i can think before i write it.

 

 

It is certainly true that living alone is getting increaser than the past. Some people would insist live alone is 

more powerful way to live this fu1cking life that we faced. and the others might say damn bro you should know the way live together with your girlfriend and boyfriend and got marry. because love is most powerful thing bro.

and the person who do not have any girl and boy friends. In the future, getting into idiot.

In this eassy, I would just write down freaking doesn't make any sense.

 

Firstly, l saw a lot of people, especially, man and boy and they always tend to reluctant  taking serious relationship with girl. There are serveral reasons why they do not prefer make hot relationship with girl

number one is that 1. caring the others always takes a lot of energy and lose my private time.

so they never make effort to make girl or boy friend and it leads to one households.

number two is that 2. because their way to speak, their way to live, is not compatible or corresponding with the others. they are what they keep arguing. they never accept the opnions of others.

 

number three is that 3. they do not afford to make girl friend even though their appearance and money is enough

they are pressed for time.

 

Secondly, i knew the first body paragraph is really bull shit but before I want to write formal writing i would like to try to write something that does not make sense. anyway, here is my second part

damn I heard that more than two people of family. is stronger than anything. because I learn i heard love is powerful. by the way library is closing soon i have to go.... i guess i am  aslo being pressed time.

anyway the one of the most importanting is keep going and try again , fail better!!!

 

In Conclusion, try again, fail better, It is not necessary to feel afraid of writing and fuck1ing english.

 

 

 

red : emphasize for sentence

blue : inforaml writing

yellow : formal writing

 

comments: most importantingly the writing order is really important

 

 

Formal answer: In recent years it has become far more normal for people to live alone, particularly in large cities

in the developed world. In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.

 

The rise in one-person households can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reasons.

On an individual level, people who choose to live alone may become more independent and self-reliant than those who live with family members. A young adult who lives alone, for example, will need to learn to cook, clean, pay bills and manage his or her budget, all of which are valuable life skills; an increase in the number of such individuals can certainly be seen as a positive development. From an economic perspective, the trend towards(about) living alone will result in a greater demand for housing. This is likely to benefit the construction industry, estate agents and a whole host of other companies that rely on homeowners to buy their products or services.

 

However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from the opposite angle.

Firstly, rather than the positive feeling of increased independence, people who live alone may experience feelings of loneliness, isolation, and worry. They miss out on the emotional support and daily conversation that family or flatmates can provide, and they must bear the weight of all household bills and responsibilities; in this sense, perhaps the trend towards living alone is a negative one. Secondly, from the financial point of view, a rise in demand for housing is likely to push up property prices and rents. While this may benefit some businesses, the general population, including those who live alone, will be faced with rising living costs.

 

In conclusion, the increase in one-person households will have both beneficial and detrimental effects on individuals and on the economy.

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