Writing task 2

We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be

concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

 

topic: cannot help everyone, only concern someone who are around us.

plan : 1. we have no afford time, money . why? we cannot go everywhere(distance) and we do not have money for everyone who need help.(quantity)quality. 

example: priority, the limit of money, the limit of time,

plan 2: agree: in the future, there is possibility they will revenge. disagree: time and money, we can help a small amount of money by sign up online donate website regularly

 

 

It is true that there are so many people who need help across the world.

While some people insist that it is a duty to help everyone who neep help although those people are far from the country that we stay, I completely agree that human being can help someone who stay diffrent countries too.

 

There are so many people who need help not only our communities but also different countries. However, we cannot help everyone who neep help. For one thing, Human beings always concern themselves first not the others. for instance, there is no one who is willing to help others when their family is sicked and faced a dangerous situation. For another thing, Even though they have enough money, they have no time. For instance, there were one million refugees in 2018 in seria. However, even if they asked the help globally if the distance is too far to go, only a small amount of people can go to their place where they need help. In other words, most people have to back to their routine for living their lives.

 

 

On the other hand, there are definitely specific ways to help them. Even though there are very long distance, we can help them by donating money on the website or find some agencies which are associated with helping. Moerover, even though people have no money, people can help someone by donating just small amount of money and also can help them when they have afford. for example, when they are on holidays, instead of enjoy their time they can make time for those who neep help. 

 

In conclusion, Some people must be needed help around world. There are a variety of ways to help them as long as people keep trying to think how to help. by helping them we will get global bond and there is likelihood when our decendants need help, they will be willing to help them.

 

 

Some people believe that we should not help people in other countries as long as there are

problems in our own society. I disagree with this view because I believe that we should try to help as many people

as possible.

 

Some people believe that we should not help people in other countries as long as there are problems in our own society. I disagree with this view because I believe that we should try to help as many people as possible.

 

On the other hand, I accept that it is important to help our neighbours and fellow citizens. 

In most communities, there are people who are impoverished or disadvantaged in some way.

ㅁAs the problems are on our doorstep, and there are obvious ways to help, I can understand why some people feel that we should prioritise

 

 

might have a much greater impact than helping in our loca area

 

 

 

 

model answer:

We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 

 

Some people believe that we should not help people in other countries as long as there are problems in our own society. I disagree with this view because I believe that we should try to help as many people as possible. 

 

On the one hand, I accept that it is important to help our neighbours and fellow citizens. In most communities there are people who are impoverished or disadvantaged in some way. It is possible to find homeless people, for example, in even the wealthiest of cities, and for those who are concerned about this problem, there are usually opportunities to volunteer time or give money to support these people. In the UK, people can help in a variety of ways, from donating clothing to serving free food in a soup kitchen. As the problems are on our doorstep, and there are obvious ways to help, I can understand why some people feel that we should prioritise local charity. 

 

At the same time, I believe that we have an obligation to help those who live beyond our national borders. In some countries the problems that people face are much more serious than those in our own communities, and it is often even easier to help. For example, when children are dying from curable diseases in African countries, governments and individuals in richer countries can save lives simply by paying for vaccines that already exist. A small donation to an international charity might have a much greater impact than helping in our local area. 

 

In conclusion, it is true that we cannot help everyone, but in my opinion national boundaries should not stop us from helping those who are in need.