some people think that it is more effective for students to study
in groups, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
1. cooperation, perspective, views, extend, accept opposit views,helping each other, relationship,community,society- discuss, company experience,
2.saving time, not disturbing by the others, assignment
It is certainly true that everyone has their own preferred study methods and all of them have their strengths and weakness. Some people would think it is better studying with groups, whereas others believe it is an ineffective way. In this essay, I will elaborate on the benefit of both perspectives and state my favorite studying style.
(idea,example,explain)- group study - define
Human beings always work together and help each other for the purpose of achieving better results than alone. The study is also not an exceptional thing. If students study together, the outcome would be better than working alone. They will exchange their views, opinions, and perspectives. For one thing, when they graduate high school or college, they will work for an assortment of companies or some agents. In these groups or communities, they ask students to have the experience to study together and work together for cooperation. For another thing, I have the experience to work for a company. They said that you need to work with senior-co-worker and peers. However, while they know how to work together, it was my first time to work with groups. When I asked or suggest something for work. They said it does not seem to work. it so happens that my opinion has been ignored. In other words, if I knew how to deal with them or how to work together. I could show my potential ability with the group. Therefore, the experience of group study is the first important step to be harmonized before going to society's workplace.
On the other hand, People sometimes have been interrupted or disrupted the others in group study. Some of them could pay attention to their works and studies to achieve the same goal in groups. However, at least, there definitely have been a person who disturbs the group as a whole. For example, when a teacher gives a group assignment, some of the students did their parts but some never took the responsibility, which means they influence the score as a whole group or other peers took their part, instead of them. Furthermore, even though it seems to be normal, there is a lot of delay time to work with groups. Some people believe they are enough competent to finish what they study and if they help or work together they would lose the time which they can use more efficient than groups.
In conclusion, Everyone should eventually decide what kind of study method suits what kind of person. While some people believe that studying alone would be more beneficial, I strongly believe study with groups will never be wasting time. by integrating with groups, people gain a large number of benefits more than that they thought.
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